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A Nonet of November

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Spring
My first attempt at a nonet. Written in Maths. Thought I might write something about the current season, and this is slightly ironic because after summer it's my least favourite season and I love the hustle and bustle of the city more than I love the isolation of the country.

The first version of this read:

Springtime, daisies and new grass this time
of the year; pollen allergies
are abundant. I walk out
and breathe in the sweet air,
free of the city
and weary feet
where nature
always
sleeps.

Introduced to this form by this lovely poem: fav.me/d6rr21i (Thumbnails are broken for me, so...)



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Abberance's avatar
Wow, this is a really nice format! You pulled it off beautifully. :la: